Sorry it's been so long, coursework and all =(
Shine of a coin
Passes from the ‘gentleman’ to the other
For her.
Red flush
As dainty as the petals he promises
For her.
The smile
And a whispered word to bring bubbled delight
For her.
That look
And the knowledge of truth
Is all for her.
xx
All for me =)
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Again, my failure to understand the poem makes me think it's epic. I love the phrase bubbled delight
and your poetry now far outstrips anything I can do
you're just awesome =D
xxxxxx
Lol, I didn't think it was that difficult...lol. Just how all the little things he does is for her.... well, me ^.^
And it seriously doesnt outstrip it AT ALL! Just read your last post - I'm thinking you win this round =P
Oh, and i'm sooo not awesome. End of =)
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